Improvements

We have currently been working on our actual film production. And having gone through the footage we have been working on, we have come to notice that we need to improve some shots and include extra footage to meet the timing requirements. We had a meeting as a group and discussed these issues and we analyzed the movie closely.

These improvements will be:

- To remove the clicking sound heard when James picks up the photo-booth polaroid.

- We will need to include more scenes of Abbie and Andy (the couple) in order to fill the time space up.

- We will also include extra titles in order meet the codes and conventions of the thriller genre.

- Also, nearing the end when the screams enter, we will elongate some of them to fill up the time space.

- The kiss with Ryan and Rosie, will be replaced with another kissing scene of Abbie and Andy in order to keep continuity of those character's. This will then be accompanied by another reaction shot of James looking angered / sad. This will be framed in a long shot so we can establish that James is in the scene.

- We may include a final kiss in order to create a high tension within the context.

- Finally, we will need to edit the music in terms of the transitions. When the music conforms into the piano, we will need to add a bridge in order to keep it smooth and help the editing run smoother.